Unresolved Conflict
A 5-7-5-7-7 poem3 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Unresolved Conflict
by Mark Schardine
I know the insanity of failed relationships. It's painful to see your spouse or boyfriend With another woman. The smart thing to do is to let go and move on but the heart is not rational. Good job.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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Unresolved Conflict
by Mark Schardine
I know the insanity of failed relationships. It's painful to see your spouse or boyfriend With another woman. The smart thing to do is to let go and move on but the heart is not rational. Good job.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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Thank you for your review and insight.
Comment from R56Ma3
You put some suspense into every word to give this piece a good strong support, and just reading this left me glued to my seat. Very well written! R56ma3 Susan C.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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You put some suspense into every word to give this piece a good strong support, and just reading this left me glued to my seat. Very well written! R56ma3 Susan C.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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Thank you for your review and insight.
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You're welcome
Comment from Bonnie Seach
The poem is skilfully formed to comply with the contest requirements
The presentation is attractive with the accompanying picture
The idea is harsh but understandable
Thank you for sharing
Best wishes for the contest
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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The poem is skilfully formed to comply with the contest requirements
The presentation is attractive with the accompanying picture
The idea is harsh but understandable
Thank you for sharing
Best wishes for the contest
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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Thank you for your review and insight.