"The Book of Death"
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2 total reviews
Comment from J.R. Michael
Well done crafting this haunting poem. The seriousness of the subject at hand is contrasted by the matter of fact, almost aloofness, of the words used to describe the situation. The juxtaposition it creates allows the piece to have a very unique tone.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
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Well done crafting this haunting poem. The seriousness of the subject at hand is contrasted by the matter of fact, almost aloofness, of the words used to describe the situation. The juxtaposition it creates allows the piece to have a very unique tone.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
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Thanks again Michael you pretty much since this pretty well as to what I was aiming for when it comes to theme and imagery.
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Comment from Marcus Belcher
I really like how intense it was and lead to the message at the end. It's important to understand the inner works/thoughts of people in that position so we can better help them. At least in my opinion. Great Job!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
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I really like how intense it was and lead to the message at the end. It's important to understand the inner works/thoughts of people in that position so we can better help them. At least in my opinion. Great Job!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
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It's very nice of you to comment about helping people.
(I like that)
And, thanks a lot for your time and review Marcus.
Doctor Ricky 1024