"Heart Spoken Moments"
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Cell-La-Ve"Fine poetry and stories from the Heart
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Comment from Vangma
Nice poem, Ricky 1024. Love knows no boundary. It penetrates the cloud cover. Its depth is bottomless, even beyond the depth of oceans. One may be near a star but carries his or her love with itself.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2021
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Nice poem, Ricky 1024. Love knows no boundary. It penetrates the cloud cover. Its depth is bottomless, even beyond the depth of oceans. One may be near a star but carries his or her love with itself.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2021
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I thank you ever so much for reviewing this and I appreciate your time and thoughts.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Jarvis Popovich
Very nice flow and rhyme. I enjoy reading your poems, as they feel good to read. Nice capture of the moment here.
Good use of imagery to bring the poem alive. Nature is good that way.
Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
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Very nice flow and rhyme. I enjoy reading your poems, as they feel good to read. Nice capture of the moment here.
Good use of imagery to bring the poem alive. Nature is good that way.
Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
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Why thank you very much for this wonderful review and the fact that you didn't bring into the fact that the basic title does not match the explanation.
Another reviewer gave it only four stars for that.
And then he had the nerves that suggested I googled before I present which I had done that and I knew exactly what I was doing of course.
I realize we get a lot of what I call wannabes here who like to teach and preach but not write.
And I would say I've been subjected to some retired English teachers!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from dellsworthpoet
The phrase you are looking for is C'est La Vie, which is a borrowed French phrase pronounced much like you spelled it. This is an interesting poem with this phrase as a refrain. May I suggest googling words for spelling when you edit. The meaning is as you posted.
In the poem it seems C'est La Vie is itself your lover.
An unusual read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
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The phrase you are looking for is C'est La Vie, which is a borrowed French phrase pronounced much like you spelled it. This is an interesting poem with this phrase as a refrain. May I suggest googling words for spelling when you edit. The meaning is as you posted.
In the poem it seems C'est La Vie is itself your lover.
An unusual read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
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How you're not telling me this something I don't already know.
The idea for the poem came from a song that is sung using the words that I posted.
Could that be why you gave it only four stars instead of five or six?
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"
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No I mainly deducted for using a phrase repeatedly without spell checking.
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I do my reviews based on the content of their ability to write the theme and imagery are very important along with the objective and objective contents.
I have personally talked to two Young writers here starting their career one in college who is just finishing a book.
I never give less than five stars no matter what and then I also educate.
Each person who writes and also reviews has their own personal opinions.
And each of those people have their own particular styles.
Doctor Ricky 1024