Treasure at the Shore
A Septolet12 total reviews
Comment from MAMONIA
I had to look back at your portfolio to see what I have missed. This is a gem!
The picture and the words bring back so many memories for me of the seashore. We lived there for 16 summers while my son was growing up.
Every year was a new experience and I loved living so close to the water. It was so peaceful. I think I loved the summer storms the most. I would sit by my window with pen in hand and write constantly.
Love your works and I am not prejudiced.
Love ya,
Marie
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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I had to look back at your portfolio to see what I have missed. This is a gem!
The picture and the words bring back so many memories for me of the seashore. We lived there for 16 summers while my son was growing up.
Every year was a new experience and I loved living so close to the water. It was so peaceful. I think I loved the summer storms the most. I would sit by my window with pen in hand and write constantly.
Love your works and I am not prejudiced.
Love ya,
Marie
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review of an older post. This means so much. Sending you my best today from Florida,
Sal XOs
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I live in Florida too.
Comment from LovnPeace
Lovely poem l lovely fitting picture. Very descriptive with a wealth of visuals included in this short writing. Love and Blessings dear Sally, Barbara
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021
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Lovely poem l lovely fitting picture. Very descriptive with a wealth of visuals included in this short writing. Love and Blessings dear Sally, Barbara
Comment Written 22-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments, dear Barbara. Thought I would try a new form. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs..
Comment from Bill Schott
This septolet, Treasure at the Shore, has the proper formatting and creates a plane of pleasure for little eyes in a kingdom, and mature eyes finding the peace of natural setting.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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This septolet, Treasure at the Shore, has the proper formatting and creates a plane of pleasure for little eyes in a kingdom, and mature eyes finding the peace of natural setting.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review of my contest entry. I love the sea and shore. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Patty Palmer
Yes, this would be pleasure bliss by the shore. The sound of the waves rushing in. Makes for a soothing and comfortable time to relax. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
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Yes, this would be pleasure bliss by the shore. The sound of the waves rushing in. Makes for a soothing and comfortable time to relax. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much!
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You're welcome!
Patty
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The image is captivating. Love the words also; it makes the picture so intriguing. Sandpipers on copper sand. The copper sand must be where the iron ore is located.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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The image is captivating. Love the words also; it makes the picture so intriguing. Sandpipers on copper sand. The copper sand must be where the iron ore is located.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Three stars?
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five stars it is!
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Thank you. Your comments suggested this was an error. :)
Comment from Wendy G
You have chosen a beautiful image, very serene, to accompany and illustrate your poem. The moment in time has been captured well for all to experience as they read. best wishes for your entry.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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You have chosen a beautiful image, very serene, to accompany and illustrate your poem. The moment in time has been captured well for all to experience as they read. best wishes for your entry.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from equestrik
You have written of such a simple treasure here, that of enjoying the amazing peace and calm that nature offers up-for free! All the best to you in the contest
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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You have written of such a simple treasure here, that of enjoying the amazing peace and calm that nature offers up-for free! All the best to you in the contest
Comment Written 19-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much!
Comment from lyenochka
Great job in capturing the peaceful and blissful moment at the beach "in reverie" in your well done septolet poem. Good use of alliteration, too. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Great job in capturing the peaceful and blissful moment at the beach "in reverie" in your well done septolet poem. Good use of alliteration, too. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You've created a lovely scene in only fourteen well thought out words for your Septolet poem. Good luck in the contest, a lovely read, cheers
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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You've created a lovely scene in only fourteen well thought out words for your Septolet poem. Good luck in the contest, a lovely read, cheers
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Natalie Finch
This is a beautiful post and an excellent entry for the contest. I hope you do well! It flows nicely and the imagery vividly captures the feeling of being on the shore.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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This is a beautiful post and an excellent entry for the contest. I hope you do well! It flows nicely and the imagery vividly captures the feeling of being on the shore.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the super kind review. Blessings!
