A Pirate's Tale
The start of an adventure.12 total reviews
Comment from zanya
A poem filled with a sense of nautical adventure as in days of yore with the required words for the prompt seamlessly sewn in to the poetic fabric - well done and good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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A poem filled with a sense of nautical adventure as in days of yore with the required words for the prompt seamlessly sewn in to the poetic fabric - well done and good luck in the contest
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Life on the ocean wave with pirates at the helm here and I enjoyed your story of old here, a fun post and I am glad I did not live in those times, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Life on the ocean wave with pirates at the helm here and I enjoyed your story of old here, a fun post and I am glad I did not live in those times, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Thanks Dolly!
Comment from mermaids
You did well creating a story in a poem using these words. I like your pirate tale and how they become rescuers. Excellent poetic form and use of words to tell a story in a poem.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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You did well creating a story in a poem using these words. I like your pirate tale and how they become rescuers. Excellent poetic form and use of words to tell a story in a poem.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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Comment from Justin Yhoung
Ah yes, the classical call, of the pirate captains swaggering behavior and distinctive voice. What a way to start a story that sparks interest in those who love these tales!
It seems you have at least some general understanding or done your research on titles of important peoples that belong on the ship. Have you yourself served aboard a shipping vessel? Spice as in excitement or literal seasonings? Regardless, you integrate the use of the topical words nicely, creating the start of what could be a classic endeavor of beloved pirate stories. It seems like you were having fun addressing the guidelines of the prompt, concocting a quick piece that could turn into a longer work if that was something you desired to do.
I'm glad you were able to enjoy participating in this contest, and I hope you did well in the competition!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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Ah yes, the classical call, of the pirate captains swaggering behavior and distinctive voice. What a way to start a story that sparks interest in those who love these tales!
It seems you have at least some general understanding or done your research on titles of important peoples that belong on the ship. Have you yourself served aboard a shipping vessel? Spice as in excitement or literal seasonings? Regardless, you integrate the use of the topical words nicely, creating the start of what could be a classic endeavor of beloved pirate stories. It seems like you were having fun addressing the guidelines of the prompt, concocting a quick piece that could turn into a longer work if that was something you desired to do.
I'm glad you were able to enjoy participating in this contest, and I hope you did well in the competition!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
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Comment from Sharon Davis
Great integration of the required words for this contest.
The poem and the image accompanying it tie in well with its theme and tone.
Nicely presented.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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Great integration of the required words for this contest.
The poem and the image accompanying it tie in well with its theme and tone.
Nicely presented.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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Comment from Eternal Muse
The visuals were so great here, and so was the picture - that I felt immersed in the by-gone times.
Excellent use of the required words.
Great creative imagery. Loved the picture of the tall ship.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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The visuals were so great here, and so was the picture - that I felt immersed in the by-gone times.
Excellent use of the required words.
Great creative imagery. Loved the picture of the tall ship.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
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Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, A Pirate's Tale, uses the required words and tells of the spirited exploits of a gang of buccaneers on their way to adventure and glory.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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This poem, A Pirate's Tale, uses the required words and tells of the spirited exploits of a gang of buccaneers on their way to adventure and glory.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2021
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Comment from siais
"The hull was loaded with barrels of Rum; For a band of Pirate rescuers they had become!" Loved the end
Well placed words and amazing poem on a pirate's tale. Thanks for sharing and best of luck, take care!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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"The hull was loaded with barrels of Rum; For a band of Pirate rescuers they had become!" Loved the end
Well placed words and amazing poem on a pirate's tale. Thanks for sharing and best of luck, take care!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2021
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Comment from Pantygynt
You got all the words in that were required here and you set the scene for a story we we never told - disappointing that, I thought.
"Ahoy There, Matye's"; Now I may have missed the point but I think this is a typo and Mateys (rather than Matye's and without the apostrophe was intended here
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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You got all the words in that were required here and you set the scene for a story we we never told - disappointing that, I thought.
"Ahoy There, Matye's"; Now I may have missed the point but I think this is a typo and Mateys (rather than Matye's and without the apostrophe was intended here
Comment Written 09-Jul-2021
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Comment from Anne Johnston
These were challenging words to use in a poem, but you have done well on it. You have chosen a good picture to illustrate your poem. I hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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These were challenging words to use in a poem, but you have done well on it. You have chosen a good picture to illustrate your poem. I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Thank You!
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You are welcome