"The Gift of Life."
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Alignments"True storiesof life loss and tragedy in this world
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Comment from kahpot
You have revised this work very well, you have told so much in fewer lines-the message is a lot clearer, with the intent still admirable, very well done, an excellent read****kahpot
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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You have revised this work very well, you have told so much in fewer lines-the message is a lot clearer, with the intent still admirable, very well done, an excellent read****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thanks kahpot.
I had a lot of fun with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Earl Corp
My takeaway from this is it is about redemption and being able to make it past the trials and tribulations of life. Very nice job. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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My takeaway from this is it is about redemption and being able to make it past the trials and tribulations of life. Very nice job. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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Thanks again for your review your time and caring thoughts Earl.
Ricky