One Sunny Night
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Comment from royowen
I'm not sure of the plot, being relatively new to reading it, but Danielle seems taken with this Stewart Briant, the writing and presentation are good, and the flow of the story is nicely written. No complications, apart from my ignorance, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Reached out a hand to s(h)ake. 2 : ordered (souvalki) souvlaki?
reply by the author on 30-May-2021
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I'm not sure of the plot, being relatively new to reading it, but Danielle seems taken with this Stewart Briant, the writing and presentation are good, and the flow of the story is nicely written. No complications, apart from my ignorance, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Reached out a hand to s(h)ake. 2 : ordered (souvalki) souvlaki?
Comment Written 30-May-2021
reply by the author on 30-May-2021
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It is wonderful of you to take time to read this late chapter. Thanks for much for your comments!
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Most welcome
Comment from Begin Again
Your story came up in "next to review" so I gave it a chance. Not knowing the beginning, I do see a relationship possibly developing with Dani and Steward... the dam might prove a conflict. Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 30-May-2021
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Your story came up in "next to review" so I gave it a chance. Not knowing the beginning, I do see a relationship possibly developing with Dani and Steward... the dam might prove a conflict. Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 30-May-2021
reply by the author on 30-May-2021
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It is so good of you to read a chapter so far in the story. Thanks so much for your rating.
Comment from lyenochka
I'm so glad you're continuing with this story! I like the tension that you show us as Dani has to balance the need for environmental responsibility and yet she's clearly falling for Stewart. But he's definitely for the dam. I like that it's a pioneer Alaskan who wants more jobs for Alaskans. You're showing us both sides of the issue while developing this love relationship. I just don't know Starla's relationship to Stewart.
they meant again at the fairgrounds (met?)
reply by the author on 30-May-2021
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I'm so glad you're continuing with this story! I like the tension that you show us as Dani has to balance the need for environmental responsibility and yet she's clearly falling for Stewart. But he's definitely for the dam. I like that it's a pioneer Alaskan who wants more jobs for Alaskans. You're showing us both sides of the issue while developing this love relationship. I just don't know Starla's relationship to Stewart.
they meant again at the fairgrounds (met?)
Comment Written 30-May-2021
reply by the author on 30-May-2021
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Many thanks for the high rating and for catching me again with "met". You caught that a last time too! Next chapter Stewart's position will be out and I think Starla will return. You have encouraged me to continue. Thanks again, Helen
Comment from Megan Silvas
This reminds me of the show with Dam. Called The Returned. Accept with out the Sci-fi twist factor. I didn't get to read the beginning of this book, but keep going. All the details are very nice.
reply by the author on 30-May-2021
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This reminds me of the show with Dam. Called The Returned. Accept with out the Sci-fi twist factor. I didn't get to read the beginning of this book, but keep going. All the details are very nice.
Comment Written 30-May-2021
reply by the author on 30-May-2021
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It is so good of you to read this late chapter. I very much appreciate your comments.