Lessons
Wisdom comes with age.3 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork for your poem.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-The first verse introduces the
idea of wisdom and how we
achieve that.
-I think many of us didn't
listen to those who were older,
and how we carry on from there
depends on each experience we face.
-A good concluding verse, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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-Nice artwork for your poem.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-The first verse introduces the
idea of wisdom and how we
achieve that.
-I think many of us didn't
listen to those who were older,
and how we carry on from there
depends on each experience we face.
-A good concluding verse, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-May-2021
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We always think we know best when we are young and sometimes we just have to learn things for ourselves to have belief. I took advice from those I trusted, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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We always think we know best when we are young and sometimes we just have to learn things for ourselves to have belief. I took advice from those I trusted, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-May-2021
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from equestrik
yes! I certainly agree with this-things seem to me to be a bit backward in the aquiring and need for wisdome-especially when raising children. Good write.
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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yes! I certainly agree with this-things seem to me to be a bit backward in the aquiring and need for wisdome-especially when raising children. Good write.
Comment Written 18-May-2021
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Thank you for your review.