Future Hope
A 5-7-5 Poem7 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
This is so true and speaks to the reader. It makes a call to action. It brings hope that we can and hopefully leave a better place for our children.
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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This is so true and speaks to the reader. It makes a call to action. It brings hope that we can and hopefully leave a better place for our children.
Comment Written 18-May-2021
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from mobileliz
A very fine message for all the world. The picture is equally touching. You did a good job of combining the two. Now if only the world would get on board and make it happen. You did good.
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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A very fine message for all the world. The picture is equally touching. You did a good job of combining the two. Now if only the world would get on board and make it happen. You did good.
Comment Written 18-May-2021
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Thank you very much
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You're welcome
Comment from Erika Seshadri
This is so lovely, and I agree one thousand percent. Every child is born an innocent human. And then somewhere along the way, for too many of them, things go wrong and they turn into miserable adults. Would be amazing if the world could somehow be better for the children.
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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This is so lovely, and I agree one thousand percent. Every child is born an innocent human. And then somewhere along the way, for too many of them, things go wrong and they turn into miserable adults. Would be amazing if the world could somehow be better for the children.
Comment Written 18-May-2021
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An uplifting and nurturing write, few words here to inspire us and carve a good future for our children. We have had a rough passage of late and these words are uplifting, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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An uplifting and nurturing write, few words here to inspire us and carve a good future for our children. We have had a rough passage of late and these words are uplifting, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-May-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from tfawcus
I like the premise behind this. If only we could make the whole world as loving and supportive as the family home, our troubles would be over. A great thing to hope for. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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I like the premise behind this. If only we could make the whole world as loving and supportive as the family home, our troubles would be over. A great thing to hope for. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Wendy G
What a beautiful image and such a lovely poem to accompany it. Your thought is exactly right. If all children loved the world, they would grow into adults who love the world, and all within it, people and nature. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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What a beautiful image and such a lovely poem to accompany it. Your thought is exactly right. If all children loved the world, they would grow into adults who love the world, and all within it, people and nature. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 17-May-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Hope and home in a rainbow of happiness. Children united front. Love united in hope Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and the writings.
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Hope and home in a rainbow of happiness. Children united front. Love united in hope Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and the writings.
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Thank you very much