Mika: The Wise Little Raccoon
a rhyme time crime16 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, Mika: The Wise Little Raccoon, uses all the required words and brings the readers to the trash to witness the wisest raccoon lapping up the week-old egg yolk.
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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This story, Mika: The Wise Little Raccoon, uses all the required words and brings the readers to the trash to witness the wisest raccoon lapping up the week-old egg yolk.
Comment Written 15-May-2021
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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Thank for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a fun contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes and great imagery. The required words are used expertly. Congratulations on a well-deserved win! You picture choice is adorable.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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What a fun contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes and great imagery. The required words are used expertly. Congratulations on a well-deserved win! You picture choice is adorable.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 14-May-2021
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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Thank you, Jan! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from karenina
NO more calls please...
We have a winner!
At least it should be, could be and will be or I'll scream!
This is well metered and rhymed, adorable reading--(I happen to love raccoons!)--and I never would have guessed you were fitting in required words...
Amazingly fine write! No kidding!
Karenina
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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NO more calls please...
We have a winner!
At least it should be, could be and will be or I'll scream!
This is well metered and rhymed, adorable reading--(I happen to love raccoons!)--and I never would have guessed you were fitting in required words...
Amazingly fine write! No kidding!
Karenina
Comment Written 14-May-2021
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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Hahaha, thank you so much. I?m happy you loved it. I just found out it did actually win, so yay! 😂
I appreciate the enthusiasm. Have a great day.
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You did! Just signed on. I'm thrilled...and so happy I heard it straight from you! YAY!---Karenina
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
This was a fun piece to read while perusing the contest entries. You've gone in an entirely different direction than the others and provided a nice distraction. Good job!
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer,
This was a fun piece to read while perusing the contest entries. You've gone in an entirely different direction than the others and provided a nice distraction. Good job!
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Thank you!!
Comment from Dr. Nad
I really enjoyed:
Mika: The Wise Little Raccoon in a rhyme time crime. He's shown through! Take a few words that have been given you and come up with a story is nothing short a marvelous funtail. The intrigue and mystery is dispensed from the opening lines and carries us to a hysterical conclusion.
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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I really enjoyed:
Mika: The Wise Little Raccoon in a rhyme time crime. He's shown through! Take a few words that have been given you and come up with a story is nothing short a marvelous funtail. The intrigue and mystery is dispensed from the opening lines and carries us to a hysterical conclusion.
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my work and bestowing upon it an excellent rating. It's appreciated!
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You are welcome. It was my pleasure to read and my privilege to review.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
I was wondering all along where's the vulgarity then bam! apropos for the theme--ingenious depiction of an inveterate forager--I can relate--we don't dare put our trash out in advance!
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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I was wondering all along where's the vulgarity then bam! apropos for the theme--ingenious depiction of an inveterate forager--I can relate--we don't dare put our trash out in advance!
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my work and bestowing upon it an excellent rating. It's appreciated!
Yes, they are very cute, but soooo incredibly naughty.
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is very cute poetry about the raccoon that went dumpster diving for whatever he could find. In this case, an egg yolk that smelled like xxxx, but was very tasty to our raccoon friend. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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This is very cute poetry about the raccoon that went dumpster diving for whatever he could find. In this case, an egg yolk that smelled like xxxx, but was very tasty to our raccoon friend. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my work and bestowing upon it an excellent rating. It's appreciated!
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You're welcome!
Patty
Comment from Wendy G
This is very cleverly written, and your poem smoothly uses the necessary words in an unforced way. The story line is original and creative. Well done. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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This is very cleverly written, and your poem smoothly uses the necessary words in an unforced way. The story line is original and creative. Well done. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my work and bestowing upon it an excellent rating. It's appreciated!
Comment from equestrik
I enjoyed this presentation. the picture is cute and of course goes well with the writing. We have raccoons that coe and raid the cat food. They are cute but it is a bit concerning at times.
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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I enjoyed this presentation. the picture is cute and of course goes well with the writing. We have raccoons that coe and raid the cat food. They are cute but it is a bit concerning at times.
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my work and bestowing upon it an excellent rating. It's appreciated!
Yes, they are adorable, but sooo naughty!!!
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is an excellent story written in poetic form and using the required words for the contest. You've described a scene we can all relate to and given character to the lowly racoon. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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This is an excellent story written in poetic form and using the required words for the contest. You've described a scene we can all relate to and given character to the lowly racoon. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Thank you!!