NaPoWriMo 2021
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Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written 5-7-5 poem. It has a Nice overall presentation. Love the dog photo with toothbrush to compliment your words as well. ð???Very well done.
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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This is a nicely written 5-7-5 poem. It has a Nice overall presentation. Love the dog photo with toothbrush to compliment your words as well. ð???Very well done.
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Thank you, Joanne, for your feedback :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an amusing write Debra, you made me smile and both the image and your words make this a special presentation, I believe some owners do clean their dogs teeth! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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This is an amusing write Debra, you made me smile and both the image and your words make this a special presentation, I believe some owners do clean their dogs teeth! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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We tried to brush Molly's - it was a disaster! We just buy dental chews for her now - she has one a day and it seems to keep her teeth clean :) Thanks for your feedback - glad you enjoyed the read! Best wishes, Debra
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Ha ha ha x
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! That picture is hysterical and so is the poem. Yes, there are just some items that we don't share! And the dentists and hygienists would definitely agree with the limits on sharing the toothbrush!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Lol! That picture is hysterical and so is the poem. Yes, there are just some items that we don't share! And the dentists and hygienists would definitely agree with the limits on sharing the toothbrush!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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LOL! I agree.... but (shocker!) not everyone does, it seems!
Thank you for your feedback, Helen. I appreciate it as always. Best wishes, Debra :)
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Heard from Katharine that you were not feeling well after your vaccine. Was it your first or second dose? Sending a prayer for quick recovery! 🙏💖
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Thank you so much, Helen...
It was my first dose of the AstraZeneca vaccine. I had it yesterday and felt ok 'til I got up this morning. Dizzy, sickly and my skin felt sore to the touch - I took the day off work and have slept all afternoon. I feel a little better, although my arm feels heavy from the jab. I'm sure I'll be much better tomorrow. Thank you for thinking of me :) x
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So glad you chose to rest. I hope with that reaction with the first dose, that your second one will go easier. My daughter had Moderna and was very tired that first dose. 💖
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Has she had her second dose yet?
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I think she did but didn't say much about that. I had Pfizer and had no reaction with the first dose. I will have my second dose in two weeks. Everyone seems to be completely different in their reaction. My 92 year old dad had no reaction to either. My brother who's in his 50s had a hard time with the second dose. Hoping your second dose goes easier.
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Thank you, me too!
My husband had the Pfizer one and was fine. He will have his second dose just as soon as they call for him.
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My husband just had his second Pfizer today. Let's keep a watch on our hubbies!
Comment from robyn corum
Debra,
I know some people are so crazy about that stuff. I remember that episode on Seinfeld in particular. I hate to tell you this, but my hubby and I aren't that particular. If we accidentally use the wrong toothbrush we don't die.
My daughter is also a bit freakish about her deoderant. I borrowed hers one day - it was sitting out while we were helping her MOVE, for heaven's sake - and she was like, no, no you keep it. hahahaha I learned not to borrow hers. Funny stuff. I guess I'm just gross. Thanks!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Debra,
I know some people are so crazy about that stuff. I remember that episode on Seinfeld in particular. I hate to tell you this, but my hubby and I aren't that particular. If we accidentally use the wrong toothbrush we don't die.
My daughter is also a bit freakish about her deoderant. I borrowed hers one day - it was sitting out while we were helping her MOVE, for heaven's sake - and she was like, no, no you keep it. hahahaha I learned not to borrow hers. Funny stuff. I guess I'm just gross. Thanks!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Hi Robyn :) Thank you for your feedback. My husband once used our daughter's roll on deodorant and left a hair stuck in the roller-ball!! She was horrified LOL
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Sherry Asbury
AWWEE - how sweet. He just wants to brush his woofers... You did this very well...I think these are your forte. Such a darling dog - my favorite breed, I just want to hug him and take him home. A very well-presented little poem!! Nicest work!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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AWWEE - how sweet. He just wants to brush his woofers... You did this very well...I think these are your forte. Such a darling dog - my favorite breed, I just want to hug him and take him home. A very well-presented little poem!! Nicest work!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Glad you enjoyed it, Sherry! Thank you for your lovely feedback. Best wishes as always, Debra :)
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You are so sweet and I love these little verses!
Comment from royowen
I must agree with that, one may catch my germs or my lack of teeth, or, worse, I might catch yours, beautifully written Debra, a great piece of artwork to embellish your great post, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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I must agree with that, one may catch my germs or my lack of teeth, or, worse, I might catch yours, beautifully written Debra, a great piece of artwork to embellish your great post, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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LOL! Thank you, Roy :) Best wishes, Debra
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Bless you
Comment from Sally Law
Yep. That and my underwear. My lingerie drawer is the holy place... some things just aren't meant to be shared. Oh, and my secret stash of chocolates.... I think that's it. Sending you my best today as always for this fun short verse poem. Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Yep. That and my underwear. My lingerie drawer is the holy place... some things just aren't meant to be shared. Oh, and my secret stash of chocolates.... I think that's it. Sending you my best today as always for this fun short verse poem. Sal XOs...
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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I agree with you, Sal! My chocolate stash is sacred too!
Thank you for your feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra :) x
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Sharing
by Debra White
LoL hello, Debra,
your 5/7/5 is so funny...I love the picture too.Good syllables count and connection between lines. It's true, nobody touch my brush~!!!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Sharing
by Debra White
LoL hello, Debra,
your 5/7/5 is so funny...I love the picture too.Good syllables count and connection between lines. It's true, nobody touch my brush~!!!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much, Gypsy, for your feedback :) Much appreciated! Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
It is with great difficulty that I refrain from snatching your used toothbrush; your bankbook only barely begins to compensate. Very cute ditty and priceless pic.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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It is with great difficulty that I refrain from snatching your used toothbrush; your bankbook only barely begins to compensate. Very cute ditty and priceless pic.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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LOL! You're funny!
Thanks, Liz :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Gloria ....
LOL, so cute, and so true. Some things just really aren't meant to be shared, and that might well be a toothbrush, unless in absolutely dire circumstances.
Cute artwork, and verse and good reminder to brush those pearlies. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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LOL, so cute, and so true. Some things just really aren't meant to be shared, and that might well be a toothbrush, unless in absolutely dire circumstances.
Cute artwork, and verse and good reminder to brush those pearlies. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your lovely feedback, Gloria :) Best wishes as always, Debra