Comment from oliver818

Excellent

This is a funny poem, I enjoyed reading it . I particularly liked the contrast between screaming inside and the sweet name 'Buttercup'. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022

You're nice Thank you :)

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Lol Sunni,

I actually had to read this two times to get it.
You were the winner and they needed better luck
next time. haha

And to think that you have never played Bingo
and you could place yourself right there...As
the "Five in a row and four corners." winner.

This was fun to read and thanks for choosing
my photo of the Niagara Casino picture. You
gambler you.

AnnaLinda

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022

You're the best. thank you :)

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

So did half the room have the winning card? I don't know much about playing bingo either. But I liked your rhyming poem with the suspenseful hope of winning!

but one by one, half of the room rised up; (rose up)

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022

You're nice. Thank you :)

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good image and
presentation, Alicia.
-I appreciate the notes.
-You did a good job
replicating what you
picture at a night of bingo.
-There is intensity about
everyone's card, but you
were a winner-at least that's
what you thought when many
others rose up, too.
-Great ending!!!
-Good luck with the rest of
NaPoWriMo.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022

You're the best. Thank you :)

reply by Pam (respa) on 04-Apr-2022

You are very welcome, Alicia.

Comment from roof35

Excellent

You made me think of my mom who loved to play bingo. I'm not sure she won often, but she like the socialization with her bingo buddies. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022

You're nice. Thank you :)