Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

A Lune
A chapter in the book
Assumptions
by Debra White

Hello, Debra,

Beautiful lune poem for the NaPoWriMo 2021 challenge. In America we have a saying.... when you assume, you make an ass of you and me. LoL

I like the theme of your poem...it's true. Cheers

gypsy hugs

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021

Thanks for your feedback, Gypsy :) We use that saying in the UK too! It's true...!
Best wishes as always, Debra

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Exceptional lune poem, dear one. You've become a master of every form. Short verse poetry is harder than it looks because a thought has to be conveyed in just a few words. A wonderful reminder here, too. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021

Hi Sally :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it as always. Best wishes, Debra :) x

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Point taken--so often we assume incorrectly. especially when prematurely. This would make for a wise slogan for a classroom or workplace poster. Food for thought!

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021

Thanks for your feedback, Liz :) Appreciated as always... Best wishes, Debra

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Debra,

Wow. You've said a mouthful here! How many times have we made certain assumptions about a stranger based on something we overheard them say (out of context) or something someone else said about them or how they looked or who they were with, etc?

I hope we finally (with age and time) learn better. Good message. Thanks!

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021

Thanks so much, Robyn :) Best wishes as always, Debra

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Yes, that's something we need to remember often. We work within patterns based on past events and make assumptions. Great use of the lune form and thank you for the additional information!

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021

Thank you so much, Helen. Best wishes as always, Debra :)

Comment from royowen

Excellent

What a timely post for me especially Debra, I must stop doing it, it ads to the clutter in one's life one doesn't need, there's enough physical clutter as there is. Well done, great timely post, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021

Thank you, Roy :) Best wishes as always, Debra

reply by royowen on 27-Apr-2021

Bless you

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

Love this...and boy is it true. Assumptions just never work out "assume" makes an ass of you and me - they say... You just keep amazing me. You have a wonderful mind.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021

Thank you for your lovely feedback, Sherry :) I appreciate it! Best wishes, Debra