Sunnilicious' NaPoWriMo, April 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "The Vase"National Poetry Writing Month, Annual Event
5 total reviews
Comment from juliaSjames
Love this
This poem is my introduction to the sijo form which I find appealing and enjoyable..
Pretty vases and lovely flowers are made for each other. But a garden has its own integrity.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
Love this
This poem is my introduction to the sijo form which I find appealing and enjoyable..
Pretty vases and lovely flowers are made for each other. But a garden has its own integrity.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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You're nice. Thank you :)
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:-))
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, I love the sentiment here. You decide to leave your garden to grow and buy cut flowers, a wise decision and I shall do the same, much enjoyed Alicia, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
Ha ha ha, I love the sentiment here. You decide to leave your garden to grow and buy cut flowers, a wise decision and I shall do the same, much enjoyed Alicia, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Xoxo :)
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for writing a sijo poem! I like how you did it with these short lines for each stanza. I like that you start with the vase, and then you fix the vase's loneliness by adding flowers. Great picture to illustrate your poem!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
Thank you for writing a sijo poem! I like how you did it with these short lines for each stanza. I like that you start with the vase, and then you fix the vase's loneliness by adding flowers. Great picture to illustrate your poem!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Thank you :)
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Hi Alicia! Good to see you back and hope you are staying well and healthy! 💖
Comment from Irish Rain
Ha ha...I love this.
I'd do the same!
I hate to cut my flowers, I
never bring them in.
I have fake flowers in my
indoor vases.
Wonderful,
blessings...
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
Ha ha...I love this.
I'd do the same!
I hate to cut my flowers, I
never bring them in.
I have fake flowers in my
indoor vases.
Wonderful,
blessings...
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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You're funny. Thank you :)
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Have a nice week!!!
Comment from royowen
A vase with flowers to adorn and partner it is like a yacht with a sail, or a mountain without snow, or a meadow without grass and flowers. This is beautifully written Alicia, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
A vase with flowers to adorn and partner it is like a yacht with a sail, or a mountain without snow, or a meadow without grass and flowers. This is beautifully written Alicia, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Thank you :)