Sunnilicious' NaPoWriMo, April 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Shad-o-Nacci"National Poetry Writing Month, Annual Event
6 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
That's wise advice -- we do need to love and accept who we are. It's part of God's command to love others as we love ourselves. I think during this pandemic time it's been a time that we have to spend more time alone and understanding ourselves. Thanks for sharing these forms!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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That's wise advice -- we do need to love and accept who we are. It's part of God's command to love others as we love ourselves. I think during this pandemic time it's been a time that we have to spend more time alone and understanding ourselves. Thanks for sharing these forms!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Hi Helen! You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem reads well with a good message. Your lines flow smoothly, there's good imagery, too. I always thought the Fibonacci was much longer. So this uses a part of it, right? Thanks for haring.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Your poem reads well with a good message. Your lines flow smoothly, there's good imagery, too. I always thought the Fibonacci was much longer. So this uses a part of it, right? Thanks for haring.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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The first stanza was Shadorma. The second stanza was Fibonacci. This was the first I heard of fibonacci. Tanka coupled with haiku is common. So is Haibun (prose coupled 5-7-5 or haiku). Thank you :)
Comment from Lighthouse Keeper
Well done, what a peaceful approach to a great sentiment for life. The words use and format help bring the message home in an elegant way. IT rings well in the heart. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Well done, what a peaceful approach to a great sentiment for life. The words use and format help bring the message home in an elegant way. IT rings well in the heart. Nicely done.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you
Good bless you :)
Comment from royowen
Indeed Life is definitely worth living. You are absolutely right dear girl, this is a good time, I've found these days not only challenging, but quite exhilarating as well, with new challenges to be met and written about. Well done, Alicia, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Indeed Life is definitely worth living. You are absolutely right dear girl, this is a good time, I've found these days not only challenging, but quite exhilarating as well, with new challenges to be met and written about. Well done, Alicia, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you
Have a nice week :)
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You too
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
I had absolutely no idea about these poetic styles. Thank you for explaining it in the notes. I enjoyed the words, the style and the messages. Thanks for sharing,
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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I had absolutely no idea about these poetic styles. Thank you for explaining it in the notes. I enjoyed the words, the style and the messages. Thanks for sharing,
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Hi! I think anything coupled is a thing. Most commonly... Tanka coupled with haiku and Haibun (prose coupled 5-7-5 or haiku). Thank you :)
Comment from kahpot
First up thank you for the notes on these two forms, second Wow! you have combined two forms that share an excellent message, be comfortable and accepting of what we have, enjoy, share, and be at ease with ourselves, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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First up thank you for the notes on these two forms, second Wow! you have combined two forms that share an excellent message, be comfortable and accepting of what we have, enjoy, share, and be at ease with ourselves, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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You're nice. Thank you :)