Round and Round
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A very sad life for these rats and many humans who need medication for mental health issues, freedom is dangerous for them, a poignant write, love Dolly x
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A very sad life for these rats and many humans who need medication for mental health issues, freedom is dangerous for them, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I could tell that this was about institutional life--I though prison. You did a good job with the rules of the contest. Your words read well and create great imagery. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I could tell that this was about institutional life--I though prison. You did a good job with the rules of the contest. Your words read well and create great imagery. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
Comment from Iza Deleanu
wow, amazing and we have become mice indeed, programmed to do whatever the comes in powers are wanting us to do. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
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wow, amazing and we have become mice indeed, programmed to do whatever the comes in powers are wanting us to do. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
Comment from Leann DS
We are only mice if we let ourselves be mice. This is a good short story that tells a powerful message. Thank you for sharing this. Hugs and blessings to you.
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We are only mice if we let ourselves be mice. This is a good short story that tells a powerful message. Thank you for sharing this. Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
Comment from bhogg
Tough to tell a story in so few words, but you did so. The art-work certainly bolsters the concept of a rat race. Yours is the first entry I've seen for this prompt. Best of luck.
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Tough to tell a story in so few words, but you did so. The art-work certainly bolsters the concept of a rat race. Yours is the first entry I've seen for this prompt. Best of luck.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
Comment from rindy ryan
This is creative! I wish there was some kind of resolution, however.. be it a bleak acceptance or a will to break free. I would suggest some kind of response to the situation. Thank for sharing.
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This is creative! I wish there was some kind of resolution, however.. be it a bleak acceptance or a will to break free. I would suggest some kind of response to the situation. Thank for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021