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Humbling

a tanka 5-7-5-7-7

4 total reviews 
Comment from BethShelby
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This poem expresses a delightful scenario that is enhanced by the picture you chose. It is time that shows the majesty and drama of creation and if you are there to take in all in you are blessed.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
    I appreciate your sentiments. As usual, you are on point!
Comment from Gloria ....
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That does indeed look like a glorious location to ponder on the wonders of the universe.

Strong imagery and poetic observations.

Much enjoyed today. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
    Your insights are much appreciated. Always happy to hear from you!
Comment from lyenochka
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That's a gorgeous picture! I like your tanka form. And yes, if the Lord invites us to observe His amazing beauty in creation, we will be able to see those marvelous, colorful sites.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
    Your insights are much appreciated. Always happy to hear from you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your words a filled with awesome imagery, June. The image is beautiful, but your words paint their own picture for readers. There's good flow and a special message from nature about her beauty and intrigue if only one will take time to look.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
    Thank you, Jan, for stopping by to read and review. I know you are a busy lady these days. Much appreciated.