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Gambling with God

Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Satan Tells the Truth"
God sent me to the casino

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Comment from Mastery
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Somehow I feel I have missed a great deal of background prior to this posting, Sam. sorry, I used to know your given name, but it has been so long....I would appreciate you giving it to me again as I plan to follow your writing again. Bless you. Bob

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
    Bob,

    You did miss a lot, but I'm glad you read this chapter. Thanks.

    Patricia
reply by Mastery on 30-Mar-2021
    :) Bob
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
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Great ending! I see many poems on this site which deal with religious themes yet they often seem heavy and flat. This piece is clever, original and puts these two entities in a situation we can all relate to. Well done!

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
    Thank you, LeftHandedScribe. I appreciate your comments and review.

    Patricia
Comment from bhogg
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I've not read your posts before. This one was interesting, kind of a dichotomy of Satan allowing the win and God recommending not to gamble. I'll check out some of your other posts.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
    Thank you, BHogg. I appreciate your comments and review.

    Patricia
Comment from Begin Again
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Patricia - We all look at God in different ways and accept him into our hearts as we believe. I pray that your path gives you strength and leads you as he sees fit. Smiles!

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
    Thank you, Begin Again. Your prayers are much appreciated.

    Patricia
Comment from Ritasher
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I will repeat myself on what I've said about your other post form this chapter - I like the contradiction you express. Right here, I see yet another interesting expression on the Satan prompting the winning and God telling you not to do that. Huh, it's a way out of gambling it is or a way to win even more? WHAT is God's will? This part raises questions to keep the reader interested. Really good job! :)

Sincerely, Rita.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
    Thank you, Rita. I love how you dig into the message I've shared. I appreciate you and your comments.

    Patricia