Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

In your lovely poem you've painted an impressive visual scene counterbalanced by the absence of sound. It isn't one-dimensional though, as the imagery is very rich.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021

Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

I like the picture. It does how the silence of the walking track. It is healthy to take morning jogs. It is quiet and if you can get up early you can hear the songs of the birds. Sunrise is beautiful too.

Thanks for sharing they poem with us.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021

Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Much appreciated. I am a little too old for morning jogs, but I love to walk.

Comment from PENofFIRE

Exceptional

What a picture you painted for your readers. The words you chose to portray your thought were perfect and the art work made this piece come alive. I am a lover of words; they thrill my soul and my soul was thrilled with this piece. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021

Thank you again for your thoughtful review of my piece. Your words are very encouraging.