In the good old days
There was a time back when I recall things.4 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
A beautiful poem for the times we are going through right now. Watching the nation falling apart breaks my heart. There's no need for what's going on right now. Never did I ever think I'd see the vandalism and the cops being killed, looting. And now our country is going to be overrun by illegals who aren't even being tested for COVID! And thousands of thousands of jobs lost all with a pen!
good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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A beautiful poem for the times we are going through right now. Watching the nation falling apart breaks my heart. There's no need for what's going on right now. Never did I ever think I'd see the vandalism and the cops being killed, looting. And now our country is going to be overrun by illegals who aren't even being tested for COVID! And thousands of thousands of jobs lost all with a pen!
good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Stephen Allen Crow
Well done! Short yet full of truth. It's hard to believe that this is where we're at... yet here we are.
Best of luck in the contest my friend, hope you do well.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Well done! Short yet full of truth. It's hard to believe that this is where we're at... yet here we are.
Best of luck in the contest my friend, hope you do well.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Susan Newell
I'm with you all the way on this one. It may not be so well received by others who would eradicate the concepts and traditions we revere. You use the term "where" which is often done when speaking of time, but I think a repeated "when" would serve better.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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I'm with you all the way on this one. It may not be so well received by others who would eradicate the concepts and traditions we revere. You use the term "where" which is often done when speaking of time, but I think a repeated "when" would serve better.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Where are the good old days? Do we need to change our costume and hair style to be back to the good old day?
You are right where are the good old days whereby:
crime is related to jail,
speech to truth,
guns to sports
debate to solutions...
Where are they in the past four years?
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Where are the good old days? Do we need to change our costume and hair style to be back to the good old day?
You are right where are the good old days whereby:
crime is related to jail,
speech to truth,
guns to sports
debate to solutions...
Where are they in the past four years?
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your review.
