Drinking from a well
Just a fun little ditty in two tercets23 total reviews
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
Nice six-line poem with six different rhyming words, and humorous as well! Be careful when drinking from a well! Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Nice six-line poem with six different rhyming words, and humorous as well! Be careful when drinking from a well! Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Shauna, thank you, have a great day.
Comment from fayesh
Your six line rhymed verse is clever. The use of the "..ipped" rhyme was done well. Maintaining the well as the centerpiece of your poem is your strong point.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Your six line rhymed verse is clever. The use of the "..ipped" rhyme was done well. Maintaining the well as the centerpiece of your poem is your strong point.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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fayesh, thank you for reading and commenting on this little poem.
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You're welcome. Good luck.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
I never knew there were so many forms of poetry till I joined this site recently. I am not a poet. But I enjoy reading poems. This is so very well written. Amusing. Thoroughly enjoyable. Good story telling in poetic form. Good luck.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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I never knew there were so many forms of poetry till I joined this site recently. I am not a poet. But I enjoy reading poems. This is so very well written. Amusing. Thoroughly enjoyable. Good story telling in poetic form. Good luck.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Seshadri, nor did know of all the varieties of poetic style. It is a truly wonderful web experience. I do hope that you continue to enjoy the great talent that is shared within.
Comment from Gloria ....
Author the water looks and sounds absolutely delicious. The natural pleasure of feeling water on one's skin and then having thirst quenched is a divine feeling.
Wishing you much luck in the voting booth with this refreshing entry.
Gloria
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Author the water looks and sounds absolutely delicious. The natural pleasure of feeling water on one's skin and then having thirst quenched is a divine feeling.
Wishing you much luck in the voting booth with this refreshing entry.
Gloria
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Gloria, thank you for the good wishes.
Comment from Bill Schott
This six-line poem, Drinking From a Well, has the required lines and captures a moment at the well when thirst was quenched with cool water at the near cost ones coolness.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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This six-line poem, Drinking From a Well, has the required lines and captures a moment at the well when thirst was quenched with cool water at the near cost ones coolness.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Bill, thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this little poem.
Comment from Lyn Peters
Excellent response to the writing prompt - in six short lines you managed to evoke images of a welcome well, belching thirst quenching water into my hands on a hot summer's day - and reminded me that I can be clumsy. Enjoyed this immensely. All the best with the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Excellent response to the writing prompt - in six short lines you managed to evoke images of a welcome well, belching thirst quenching water into my hands on a hot summer's day - and reminded me that I can be clumsy. Enjoyed this immensely. All the best with the contest.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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LYN, THANK YOU!
Comment from Wendy G
Well - at least you were able to create a little poem from your near accident. That's the skill - to transfer everyday experiences into something memorable and fun. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Well - at least you were able to create a little poem from your near accident. That's the skill - to transfer everyday experiences into something memorable and fun. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Smiling back, have a great week!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful monorhyme here with the added spice of a bit comedic misstep! ;) ;) Such a fun offering for this limited length contest -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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A wonderful monorhyme here with the added spice of a bit comedic misstep! ;) ;) Such a fun offering for this limited length contest -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you Yvette.
Comment from RetroStarfish
This is very clever indeed. Great rhythm to support the six rhyming lines. A complete story, with some humour thrown in. Very nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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This is very clever indeed. Great rhythm to support the six rhyming lines. A complete story, with some humour thrown in. Very nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Julie Sandy
This is a nice entry for the six-line poem competition.
Good rhyme throughout, nice use of words.
Thank you for sharing
good luck in the competition
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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This is a nice entry for the six-line poem competition.
Good rhyme throughout, nice use of words.
Thank you for sharing
good luck in the competition
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Julie, thank you!
