Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You brought the romance here in your fine acrostic and the essence of love came through with a perfumed aroma, much enjoyed, luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021

Thanks for a very positive review.
Geoff

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

this is such a wonderfl poem of love and gratirude for this one you love so much. It is beautiful. All the best to you in the upcoming i hope poetry contest.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Geoff

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

That is a lovely ending - becoming part of each other's family tree - very original and creative, and sets your work apart from others. Well written, and good wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Geoff

Comment from Julie Sandy

Excellent

Great entry for the romance competition, it has great rhyme as required and a lovely story to tell.

Thank you for sharing

good luck in the competition

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a Very nicely written Romance poem. It has a great flow and rhyme. Beautiful photo to go with your words. Nice choice of background colour and font. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This acrostic love poem speaks your romantic living and how great, grand and ecstatic your life has been as you think of your future life and family; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Thanks very much for your review.
Geoff

Comment from Hannah Baller

Excellent

A nice bit of rhyming, as they were consistent and didn't 'near-rhyme'. I liked the full use of sentences rather than just adjectives used for the acrostic part. Really good!

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Thanks very much for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Geoff

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

I don't have a deserving six but this is simply wonderful, dear Geoff. A beautifully written and illustrated acrostic with nice rhyme. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :) xo

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Thank you Sally. I'll accept your virtual six :)
Geoff

Comment from Susan Newell

Excellent

Delightfully written with an unforced acrostic. The irregular rhyme didn't bother. If this is a true story, you are a lucky man. Very nice output for the prompt.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. I consider myself very lucky, not sure how she puts up with me at times.
Geoff

Comment from LeftHandedScribe

Excellent

This is a lovely piece. You accomplish both rhyme and the acrostic form so well--a two for one gift! My only suggestion, and this is splitting hairs, is to look at lines O, A and E. These three lines, though written beautifully, don't quite keep the rhythm. I think with a couple word tweaks they will fall right in line. Great work!

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. I will take a look at the lines you suggested.
Geoff