Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Very sad and heartbroken poem. Your work is true and authentic, and your pain is vividly expressed. Your style here is unique, and reflects the subject matter - a little jagged, like your broken heart.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021

Thanks for your time and Review.
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Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

This is a sad poem. It is well written.

The following sentences are sentimental and full of sadness:
"My withered heart can find and bleed, And, cry out with each and every beat."

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021

Thanks for your time and review.
Doctor Ricky 1024