Seasons In Time
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Joyous Springtime"Poems about the different seasons.
2 total reviews
Comment from AnnaLinda
FM Wright,
I like your 5 line poem that's exactly 20 syllables. I like these 2 lines:
"birds sing
their songs of great joy"
and you were able to include a rhyme in this as well.
I think you need lighter font on this. The artwork is
beautiful, but your words don't show up too well...
for me at least. Maybe ivory would work.
Good luck!
Anna
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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FM Wright,
I like your 5 line poem that's exactly 20 syllables. I like these 2 lines:
"birds sing
their songs of great joy"
and you were able to include a rhyme in this as well.
I think you need lighter font on this. The artwork is
beautiful, but your words don't show up too well...
for me at least. Maybe ivory would work.
Good luck!
Anna
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your suggestion. I shall look into it.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, it's Spring your heart:) On my end is still wishful thinking: "In Spring
birds sing
their songs of great joy
which pour forth as falling rain
bids Winter adieu." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Wow, it's Spring your heart:) On my end is still wishful thinking: "In Spring
birds sing
their songs of great joy
which pour forth as falling rain
bids Winter adieu." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you ever so much for your review. It is most appreciated.