Renga Two
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Skipping Stones"multi-author book number two
6 total reviews
Comment from Mark Schardine
continual rains smooth
out the toughest Massif rocks --
perfect skipping stones
How many millennia did it take to make the stones for a brief moment of joy?
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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continual rains smooth
out the toughest Massif rocks --
perfect skipping stones
How many millennia did it take to make the stones for a brief moment of joy?
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review and kind words
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Gypsy A great 5-7-5 and reminded me of me and my grandchildren trying to skip stones last week at a little creek we visited Unfortunately our stones were too thick and just went plop Ha ha
But I have skipped stone before There is an art to it
cheers Chris
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Hi Gypsy A great 5-7-5 and reminded me of me and my grandchildren trying to skip stones last week at a little creek we visited Unfortunately our stones were too thick and just went plop Ha ha
But I have skipped stone before There is an art to it
cheers Chris
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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That sounds like fun :)
Thank you for your review and kind words, Chris...cheers
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very well written 5-7-5 Renga poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery that went well with your words. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Gypsy, This is a very well written 5-7-5 Renga poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery that went well with your words. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem, Teri. You are very kind.
Gypsy
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you are so welcome my friend! love you! Teri
Comment from DonandVicki
I like the alliteration of the s sound which matches the ripples in the water. A well thought out Renga and I have to say that you are a poetic machine. Don
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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I like the alliteration of the s sound which matches the ripples in the water. A well thought out Renga and I have to say that you are a poetic machine. Don
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem, Don. You are very kind.
Gypsy
Comment from greyson ernst
wow this is incredible and the picture is beautiful and majestic nice job have a happy weekend and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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wow this is incredible and the picture is beautiful and majestic nice job have a happy weekend and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem, Greyson. You are very kind.
Gypsy
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! I like your poem. No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! I like your poem. No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem, Raul. You are very kind.
Gypsy
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You're welcome, my friend!