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America - Forever Beautiful

Lady Liberty. Old Glory and Us

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This one-hundred-word story, America-Forever Beautiful, has the required word count and reminds us that it takes more than a asshole and his turds, crapping in the halls of Congress, to make even a dent in America's resolve.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
    Amen...couldn't have said it better myself. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
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I hope and pray that God will help us restore our broken democracy, which has been assaulted from many angles, long before the siege on the Capitol, January 6th. Thank you for sharing this hopeful essay.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
    Thank you for reading my contest entry and for the kind comments. I truly appreciate it. I pray for unity and freedom for all. Smiles to you!
Comment from LJbutterfly
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You have written an accurate, non-political description of events that will triumphantly live in the history of America forever. Your comments should appear as an op-ed in newspapers across the country. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
    Thank you for reading my contest entry and for the kind comments you have expressed. I pray that our country can stand on its feet again in unity and freedom for all. Smiles to you!
Comment from Mia Twysted
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This piece is asking the people to look at what they are doing. Reaching out a hand to hold and looking for hope that we can come together and make things better.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
    I pray that like my writer's name we as a country can Begin Again; to find unity and brotherhood amidst us all. Thank you for your kind words. Smiles to you!
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very beautiful and well written true 100 Word story you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive and true words with lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
    I believe that prayers will lead us in the right direction and America can become whole again. I appreciate your kind words. Smiles to you!
Comment from equestrik
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I love this beautiful country and I love what America was founded on. There have been many sad and disappointing occurrences over our more recent history. This is a good and expressive write.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
    Thank you for stopping by and reading my story. I believe in equality for all and I believe in America. Thank you and may you be blessed.
Comment from victor 66
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I totally agree with your words within your poem. I know it sounds extreme, but I am relieved that, that nazi is now no longer our leader and we now have a champion of the people. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
    I pray that peace will become the norm again and we will all work together to find a sense of unity and betterment for everyone. Thank you for reading and commenting. Smiles to you!
reply by victor 66 on 22-Jan-2021
    You are most welcome, mystery writer. Here's to a new year and better times.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Yes, our flag and its colors NEVER runs. Your contest entry is in good for, Mystery Author. I loved reading it and am proud to be an American. Your words create great imagery. I agree with your well thought out words and the power of America, the flag, and her people to stand strong.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for your kind comments. The story was meant to show that regardless of the many scars we suffer, America remains strong and proud if we stand together. Smiles to you!
Comment from Wendy G
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This prayer is the verbalising of so many, who just want to live in peace and security, hoping for happiness. This will never come through violence. I join in prayer for your country.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
    Thank you...I pray that each person can recognize the bad in themselves and turn to the good within themselves. Let us live in peace. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Smiles to you!
Comment from Ben Colder
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Hope so but time will tell. It always does. Place God at the helm of the ship will make the case but the other means total disaster so yes, we shall pray God's guidance.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
    No one person can do this alone and it calls for unity of all. If we are to become a better nation we must appreciate everyone who is an American and pull together. Yes, I believe success is found when God is at the helm. Thank you!