Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

A creative short story, reflecting on one's own choices in life and the outcomes. It is well written keeping the twist until the very end. Good wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021

Thank you for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

I would thank you are right. I hope I never experience it and in Heaven thirty minutes before anyone knows I am dead.
Good short story. I hope you win the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021

Thanks very much for your review

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

I like the twist at the end of this. To think how odd it would be to watch your own funeral. I also wonder what they will do with the new life they have before them.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Good

I like the picture. It is a bright blue sky day. However it doesn't seem to watch a sad story. I assumed the deceased is associated with drugs.

I agree with what you said, "Attending your own funeral can be very depressing."

Wish you luck...

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021

Thanks very much for your review.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Super twist of scenery, when the deceased gets to reflect on his own death and funeral:"I faded into nothingness as the service broke up. Attending your own funeral can be very depressing." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Hmm, I am a bit torn about this. I get that ending was meant to be a twist, a surprise but I feel, speaking about himself in the second person after also speaking in the first person wasn't fair. It is not a misdirection but something else.

I will ponder this more.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021

Thanks for your review.