Melted
If the love of a baby can't melt your heart, nothing can.6 total reviews
Comment from Alli Johnston
Beautiful picture, color choice, and poem. I don't have children but my father has another grandchild and you could so easily tell his entire personality changed with happiness!
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Beautiful picture, color choice, and poem. I don't have children but my father has another grandchild and you could so easily tell his entire personality changed with happiness!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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My dad also. I just can't figure out what it is, but there's something about a grandchild? Pure love. Thank you for reading my poem and for the review. Hugs.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The innocence in babies and children melt our hearts and we should nurture them with the warmth of our own hearts to ensure they become good adults, your words are loving here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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The innocence in babies and children melt our hearts and we should nurture them with the warmth of our own hearts to ensure they become good adults, your words are loving here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind words about my poem. I appreciate them. Hugs.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
The poem meets the requirements of between 20 and 25 syllables. The poem tells ice will melt and eventually becomes water. This part can symbolize icecream and the last line shows a baby's smile can get anything from a grandpa.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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The poem meets the requirements of between 20 and 25 syllables. The poem tells ice will melt and eventually becomes water. This part can symbolize icecream and the last line shows a baby's smile can get anything from a grandpa.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. I'm not really sure what you mean by ice symbolizing ice cream. Could you please explain what you mean? I appreciate your time in reviewing my poem. Hugs.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery with a
theme of coldness and
thawing of a man's heart.
-A very good ending, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery with a
theme of coldness and
thawing of a man's heart.
-A very good ending, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your thoughtful review. I appreciate your comments and for your time. Hugs and blessings.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Those little innocent souls certainly do have that effect on folks, don't they? :) A wonderful offering for the naani contest here -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Those little innocent souls certainly do have that effect on folks, don't they? :) A wonderful offering for the naani contest here -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my contest entry and for your kind review. I appreciate it. Hugs to you and blessings.
Comment from Anne Johnston
So much truth in a few words. It would be a very hard-hearted person indeed who could resist a little one calling him "Grandpa" A very good picture to illustrate your verse.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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So much truth in a few words. It would be a very hard-hearted person indeed who could resist a little one calling him "Grandpa" A very good picture to illustrate your verse.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much! I really had fun writing this poem. Thankfully, nobody can see how it was when I first started out. Ha ha blessings to you.
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You are welcome