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Comment from Wendy G
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Yes, He will indeed hold us, regardless of the frailties of our outward bodies. When we commit our heat and soul to Him, He holds us in His everlasting arms, safe and secure. Beautiful poem. Praying for Janet.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
    Amen! Thank you for the wonderful review, Wendy! Happy New Year!!
Comment from poetwatch
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Thank you, Helen. May Janet find a calming peace and become better, we all have fallen, but it looks like her's are bad. This is a nice Sapphonic Triad poem. I never heard of it, but I'm new to poetry.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
    I hope you'll try one. It's easy especially if you have a quote you want to focus on. Thanks for reviewing and for your compassion for our sister. Bless you!
Comment from Teri7
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Helen, Thank you for posting this Sapphonic Triad about Janet and her fall. She is in my prayers. I appreciate all you do to help us on here! love, blessings and Happy New Year! Teri

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
    Thank you so much, Teri, especially, for your prayers!! Appreciate your super rating, too! Hugs!!
Comment from karenina
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Prayers fly heavenward for Janet! It does seem like there have been many falls and illnesses to deal with. I pray the Divine Healer eases her pain and speeds her healing. What an intriguing form as well! --Karenina

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
    Thank you so much, Karenina! Your prayers are so appreciated! We are becoming more fragile every year on Earth we live. Hugs!!
reply by karenina on 30-Dec-2020
    OH I KNOW! I was shoveling twelve inches of "partly cloudy" (oh those weatherman)---and slipped on the ice beneath. My back is still protesting!--Karenina
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
    Oh no!! Hope you are recovering well. I used Arnica gel for the bruising.
    🙏💖💕
Comment from aryr
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This was great Helen, your words covered the expectations of life and to trust in God. I will definitely keep Janet in our prayers, that sounds horrible with all she did and I will definitely pray for a successful surgery. This was great.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
    Thank you so much for your prayers, Alie! She had her surgery today. She couldn't get to the computer because she was mostly on her sofa. I hope she has someone visiting and helping her.
    Hugs!
reply by aryr on 30-Dec-2020
    You are so very welcome Helen. I agree that she should have someone helping her. Prayers for Janet will keep coming. Thank you for thinking of her. Hugss.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork
and quote, Helen.
-I am sorry to hear
about Janet.
-You chose a good form
for your poem for her.
-I like how you show that
even though she fell,
that God and faith will
protect her and keep her well.
-Thanks for caring and sharing
the poem.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
    Thank you, Pam! She had her surgery yesterday so am praying for a quick recovery.
    Hugs!!
reply by Pam (respa) on 31-Dec-2020
    You are very welcome, Helen, and thanks for sharing the news. Happy 2021 to you, too!!!
Comment from Pantygynt
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I expect we shall hear of more falls and slips as winter tightens its hold on the northern hemisphere. This is a most apposite piece under the circumstances.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
    Thanks so much, Jim! We are all more vulnerable now.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written sapphonic triad. Sometimes we slip and fall on the path God guides us to walk on we get physically hurt and the pain is extremely hard to beat. Spiritually we must stay strong and let God heal us. Good luck, my prayers are with Janet and that He will allows a speedy recovery.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
    Sorry for my late reply, Sandra! Appreciate the review. She had her surgery yesterday. Thank you so much for your prayers!!
    Hugs!
Comment from AnnieDawn
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I will keep her in my prayers. Elderly falls are especially bad with brittle bones too. It is not a good time to be having surgery with the pandemic putting people in the hospital. Thanks for sharing the poem and for sharing so we can lift up another in prayer.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
    Yes, we keep getting so vulnerable and fragile as we age! Hope we get stronger in spirit and in faith!
    Thanks so much for your prayers, Annie!
    Hugs!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fine poem of prayer offered to Janet in her hour of need here Helen, a fine well rhymed poem full of good wishes, falling can be dangerous as we age, it is a shock to the system too, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
    Yes, I fell twice recently and I realized how much it takes to heal from minor falls. Thanks so much, Dolly! Hugs!