Renga Two
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Pastel Palette Sky"multi-author book number two
5 total reviews
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a colorful poem, what a colorful art and what a colorful reflection. I like the color in the poem matches the color in the art. I see. Refection has double meaning here, the reflection of the sky and the reflection of the mind, cold ->blue.
Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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What a colorful poem, what a colorful art and what a colorful reflection. I like the color in the poem matches the color in the art. I see. Refection has double meaning here, the reflection of the sky and the reflection of the mind, cold ->blue.
Well done.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs :)
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent addition to your Renga book. A most artistic presentation with words to match the colours of Glazier Lake.
A smooth read and great place to take the imagination. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Excellent addition to your Renga book. A most artistic presentation with words to match the colours of Glazier Lake.
A smooth read and great place to take the imagination. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 30-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs :)
Comment from lyenochka
I had to look up Glazier Lake - so cool. It really looks like glasswork so beautifully reflecting the sky. Good use of alliteration in the first line and conveying the sense of cold in the last two!
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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I had to look up Glazier Lake - so cool. It really looks like glasswork so beautifully reflecting the sky. Good use of alliteration in the first line and conveying the sense of cold in the last two!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind feedback. I'm glad you like it.
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Comment from juliaSjames
I love the colorful sky in this gorgeous poem.. Would you believe I saw such a sky this evening? Exquisite.
Glazier Lake is such a clever choice. Sounds like glacier but refers to glass, so ice blue reflections is both appropriate and a reference to the iceberg.
Beautifully crafted as the renga book shifts into a new phase. I so admire your expertise in this genre.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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I love the colorful sky in this gorgeous poem.. Would you believe I saw such a sky this evening? Exquisite.
Glazier Lake is such a clever choice. Sounds like glacier but refers to glass, so ice blue reflections is both appropriate and a reference to the iceberg.
Beautifully crafted as the renga book shifts into a new phase. I so admire your expertise in this genre.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 30-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind feedback. I'm glad you like it.
Hugs
Comment from Mark D. R.
A very colorful addition to your Renga collaboration Gypsy!
Do like the visions you expressed in your 5-7-5 post. I have only visited Maine twice, but not to Glazier Lake. We of course sampled more than a few lobster dishes and souped on New England chowder.
Have a good poem day!
Mark
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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A very colorful addition to your Renga collaboration Gypsy!
Do like the visions you expressed in your 5-7-5 post. I have only visited Maine twice, but not to Glazier Lake. We of course sampled more than a few lobster dishes and souped on New England chowder.
Have a good poem day!
Mark
Comment Written 30-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind feedback. I'm glad you like it.
Hugs