Late
A 1-6-1 about waiting for a date.4 total reviews
Comment from palmart
We humans sometimes consider many variables but we forgot about one of the most valuables: time. We procrastinate important things waiting for a suitable moment, that sometimes never arrives. After these pandemic times, we should reconsider the value of time. Your picture shows explicitly what may happen if we do not...
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2020
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We humans sometimes consider many variables but we forgot about one of the most valuables: time. We procrastinate important things waiting for a suitable moment, that sometimes never arrives. After these pandemic times, we should reconsider the value of time. Your picture shows explicitly what may happen if we do not...
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for your review. Your comments are most apreciated.
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You´re very welcome, fm wright!
Have a blessed week!!
Comment from Sally Law
This is a great offering in 1-6-1 short verse poetry. My vote is here for you, mystery poet, and my very best wishes for your entry.
Blessings,
Sally Law :)) xo
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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This is a great offering in 1-6-1 short verse poetry. My vote is here for you, mystery poet, and my very best wishes for your entry.
Blessings,
Sally Law :)) xo
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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I thank you for the review and very best wishes. Both are appreciated.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with the three required rhymes.
It's never good to be late on a date.
Other interpretations are possible as the picture suggests.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020
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You've written an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with the three required rhymes.
It's never good to be late on a date.
Other interpretations are possible as the picture suggests.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 29-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020
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Thank you, friend Robert, for your comments and rating.
Comment from greyson ernst
its really good i could not rhyme and do a 1-7-1 but i saw who your up against you both have a good chance so im just warning
keep writing stay safe
Sincerely Greyson Ernst
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020
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its really good i could not rhyme and do a 1-7-1 but i saw who your up against you both have a good chance so im just warning
keep writing stay safe
Sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 29-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020
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Appreciate both your comments and rating. Thank you.