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Renga Two

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multi-author book number two

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Comment from Ulla
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Hi Zanya, I loved this Renga continuation. Your 7-7 poem says it all, now that winter is all but coming. You inspired me to write yet another continuation. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2020

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2020
    Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from lyenochka
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Thanks for joining in this book that Gypsy created. I love bright red colors in winter! Great job with your 7/7 poem that is full of alliteration. I like the comparison of color to light.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2020

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2020
    Thanks for a superb reveiw zanya
Comment from Bill Schott
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This couplet, Winter Light, for the ongoing renga, shows us in words that the leafless trees still contribute to the beauty of the scene.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2020

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2020
    A concise and focused reveiw -thanks zanya