Comment from Lulube

Excellent

GOOD THING YOU SAID IT IS A FAIRYTALE! It would be nice if there was always a silver lining on the other side of the trail. but they say, A change is as good as a rest. that's right, get rid of stress. But the little girl felt the need to be there for him and the little boy never gave up.

lulube

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020

Yeah I love writing this because I use it as an introduction.
To beautiful women that hit me up on dating sites!
Ricky

reply by Lulube on 02-Nov-2020

ahhhh, you sly dog, I guess all men find what works for them to start up an invite. Women do too, but maybe more so in their walk and how they bend forward towards the seat your sitting in. lol

reply by Lulube on 02-Nov-2020

ahhhh, you sly dog, I guess all men find what works for them to start up an invite. Women do too, but maybe more so in their walk and how they bend forward towards the seat your sitting in. lol

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought this was well written. I love how you tell a story with this poem. The use of dialogue is unique and works well. A creative and enjoyable poem.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020

Thanks again as you continue to honor me with your reviews.
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Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

I enjoyed this immensely, it was very positive and fitting for a child's book of poetry. Very nice job. Thanks for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020

Thanks again Earl as you continue to honor me with all your reviews!
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