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5/7/5 renga poem following June Sargent's 7/7 couplet, ch 65
Renga Multi-Author Book
: Blue Heaven Iris by Gypsy Blue Rose
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laughter wrinkles tell
 

a good life filled with love tale --
 

blue heaven iris
 

























 

Author Notes
Blue Heaven Iris is a flower but it is also the eye color of the old man's iris.
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I followed June Sargent's 7/7 couplet

Chapter sixty four by June Sargent

apple of grandpa's eyes
full of curiosity
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Renga is a Japanese collaborative poetry form in which poets write alternating verses of 5-7-5 stanzas and 7-7 couplets which are linked in succession by multiple poets. Only the first 5/7/5 is a haiku; the rest 5/7/5 stanzas are only restricted to syllable count. Renga is older than haiku.

Please, if you would like to add a chapter to this book of renga, read these instructions then copy and paste to your author notes. If you need help, please do not hesitate to contact Gypsy Blue Rose.

Steps to Post a Chapter:

click on the ADD CHAPTER icon, located above the review box.

If the last poem is a 5/7/5 stanza, write a 7/7 couplet, if the last poem is a 7/7 couplet write a 5/7/5 stanza. Write about the SAME THEME of the previous chapter but please don't REPEAT words.

Post your poem as usual but it will be part of the book. A copy will go to your portfolio and you keep your reviews.

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Thank you very much for reading me,

Gypsy

     

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