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My thoughts on being lost at sea.
Beautiful Poetry from Long Beach Is
: Turrent of No Relief! by Ricky1024
Artwork by cleo85 at FanArtReview.com

"Turrent of No Relief?"
Written on July 12th, 2020
By Doctor Ricky 1024
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The Torrent of waves are Poundless!
Ever Searching, Teasing, and never Pleasing!
I am caught within this Sin!
And, as hard as I try?
...
My mouth is Salted and Sealed with the Waste of this Sea!
It knows not and cares not for me!
My body is Exhausted at all Costed!
...
I try to no end!
And there is little relief as the "Countless Currents"
Yes, of Foaming Deeds...
Wash over me!
...
It's almost over now and I welcome the Peacefulness Below...
Going Home...
Forever Lost.....
In the Sea of Foam!
As my body remains in disbelief!
"Turrents of No *Relief!"
Approximate Word Count:157.



Author Notes
*Relief: n.
feeling of missing, no solvant, lacking, pleasure
Note:
As I tempted to go body surfing today on Long Beach Island.
In a town called Ship Bottom in New Jersey.
The countless foaming waves offered no relief. And, they came and went in groves.
Yes, no more or less than five to ten seconds apart.
...
Special thanks goes out first, as always, to Heavenly Father and His Son Jesus Christ.
Fanstory and Tom the Administrator.
Fan Art Review.
And, this Amazing writer as well as Talented artist, 'cleo85'
And her Incredible picture entitled, "Tidal Wave"

     

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