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A stranger's magnetism...
Magnetic Moment by Dick Waters
100 Word Dash writing prompt entry

Her striking beauty was a magnet for my eyes.

I was hiding behind my newspaper, but continually stealing looks.

Her skirt was much too short, but I wasn't going to tell her.

She stood to get off the train, and as luck would have it...it was my stop, too.

Two steps off the train, and the skies opened up. I popped my umbrella and held it over our heads. Her smile was my reward.

"I saw you watching me...thanks, I guess."

"I couldn't avoid it, you're breathtaking," I said as I leaned in and kissed her.

We are now engaged.



Writing Prompt
Topic: A first kiss between strangers.

Let's take flash fiction to the extreme. Can you tell a complete story with just 100 words. If so this is your opportunity to shine.


Author Notes
When the moment strikes...don't strike out!

     

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