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In the Pawn Shop by RodG
Surprise! 80 Words or Less writing prompt entry

"You like guns?" I looked at the pearl-handled revolver on the counter fondly.

"No," my customer said, shooting a look over his shoulder at my front door.

I smiled at his nervousness. I'd seen it in others many times before.

"And how has this one come into your possession?"

"My father died. Left it to me." The young man's eyes would not meet mine.

I grabbed the gun. "Surprise, lad! It's mine. Stolen from my house two nights ago."


Writing Prompt
Write a complete story in 80 words or less.

The theme is 'Surprise.'

You may incorporate this theme into the story any way you wish, but it must somehow relate to the topic.

Author Notes
Artwork courtesy of Google images.

WORD COUNT: 80 Apple Pages

     

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