Exceptional Haiku haiku (in the far pasture) by kiwisteveh Haiku Poetry Contest contest entry

across spring pasture two wild horses gallop free my heart leaps   Author Notes I have edited this following some excellent suggestions from several reviewers. Yep, I know this is 5-7-3 - the rules state that it is not compulsory to follow the more traditional 5-7-5 format and it is clear, at least to me, that the shortened satori line is much stronger.

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