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Routines are sometimes meant to be broken...
Shake It Up!! by Y. M. Roger
60 WORD DASH writing prompt entry

The elevator stopped at fourteen. He got on. Like always.
 
On descent, we stared up at the numbers. Just like always.
 
But today, I was determined to change our ‘always’ lobby part. The doors opened, and he stepped aside, indicating I should exit first. Surprising him, I turned and smiled and indicated he go first.
 
We both laughed.
 
Mission accomplished.

 


Writing Prompt
Tell a complete story using 60 words or under.

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Author Notes
Elevator image from Google Images via YouTube.

     

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