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A Matter of Perspective - A Sedoka Contest Offering
The Lady and the Koi by Y. M. Roger
Sedoka Poem writing prompt entry


Quiet koi so still –
Notice not the world above.
Oh, that I could know your peace…

 
Lurking lady looms –
Sees not she stands in my sun.
Oh, how I wish you would go…


 


Writing Prompt
Write a sedoka poem. A sedoka consists of two unrhymed three-line stanzas, each with a syllable count of 5 - 7 - 7.
Often these stanzas go at the same subject from different perspectives, but that is not a requirement.

Author Notes
Image of 'Koi Fish Painting' from vidalcuglietta.com.

     

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