- The Patience of Dadby Y. M. Roger
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The Patience of Dad by Y. M. Roger
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Although Dad tried, sweet Elizabeth just wasn’t a good fisherman. Ever.
On warm Saturdays, he’d take the whole family fishing. Dad would always bait Lizzie’s hook and even put her line out.
“Watch carefully, Lizzie-Girl. When the cork goes under, just tug back.”
He said those words a thousand times, without results.
One week, Lizzie was very determined. When that cork disappeared, she yanked up. Hard.
Lizzie’s first and only catch? A pair of fish lips!
Chuckling, Dad hugged her.

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