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A Dactyl Poem
Commentary and Philosophy
: Poetic Elements by Treischel

Often is said, that the beauty of Poetry
carried on ripples of meter in fabulous
cadences marching in tandem victorious,
adds to its overall scholarly chemistry.

Figure in rhyming that makes it more difficult
writing a poem that is genuine artistry.
Yet, it can add a pure golden embroidery,
as in a storm the sky lights to a thunderbolt.

Oh, as I vie to it
Can't get enough of it.



Author Notes
This poem is in response to a challenge from Pantygynt, to write a pure Dactyl poem whereby each line ends in dactylic end rhyme, closing with two unstressed syllables. So here it is

This is a Dactyl Poem
A Dactyl Poem is a verse, often used in Greek or Latin. While a Trochee is the opposite of an iamb, a Dactyl is the opposite of an Anapest. A Dactyl is a long syllable followed by two short syllables, as determined by syllable weight. In accentual verse, often used in English, it is a stressed syllable followed by two unstressed syllables.
iambic - da Dum, da Dum
trochaic - Dum da, Dum da
anapestic - da da Dum, da da Dum
dactylic - Dum da da, Dum da da

     

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