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Senryu Yourself
Slow Down by Cedar
    Senryu Yourself Contest Winner 

my wife compares me
with money when making love
neither one lasts long


Writing Prompt
Here is a chance to get to know some of your fellow Fanstorians! Who's brave enough to use satire or irony against yourself? Use 17 syllables OR LESS, as long as it follows a short/long/short format (defined by counting syllables).
Senryu Yourself
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