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: Last Thing You See by Bill Schott
100 Word Flash Fiction contest entry
Artwork by stawickistudio at FanArtReview.com

"My face will be the last thing you see before you die."

The words sounded hollow to Dink; not at all the tone that would cause a chill.

"My flippin' face, mother scratcher, will be what you see before I kill you!"

That was a bit better, but he knew his censored profanities wouldn't scare anyone.

Dink pulled the revolver out of his baggy, pants pocket and pointed it at the mirror in front of him.
 
"I'm going to blow your head off!"

He scratched his temple with the pistol and it fired.

It was the last thing he saw.


 

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