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Blackout by DALLAS01
Emotions writing prompt entry

Lights--screaming red
pulsing,
jarring him awake;
silence lying beneath
the front wheel
floating in a puddle
stained in Crimson--
packaged small
curled and rumpled
in a ball;
sirens flashing
urgency
posted in the rear view mirror;
remnants of a party--
on the seat an opened beer.
Soaked khakis seeping urine;
confusion paints the night,
writes the story,
seeds the fear.
A life exhaled on the perforated seam of sobriety.


Writing Prompt
Write an emotional poem. Make your reader feel. It could be that they will laugh, cry, smile, etc. just make sure they feel something.

Author Notes
Thanks to rasmine for the artwork.
Originally written as a run on, no punctuation.

     

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