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tanka (red roses) by Val Crisson
Tanka writing prompt entry

red roses
wilt in a vase
dying
she rests quietly
on a hospital bed


Writing Prompt
Write about something lost. Something intangible.

Author Notes
As not many Fanstory people do not write tanka, I will once again explain the proper way to title a tanka . tanka (and the first line of the tanka). Proper tanka should be the first two lines should be about nature, then there is a pivot line which should lead into human emotion.

     

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