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Senses Over Time
Senses by bhogg
A hundred word story writing prompt entry

One day, I was moved by a sunset over Mobile Bay. While beautiful, the sight sense transported me back over time and space.

In the 1960's, I lived in Colorado Springs, Colorado. Our picture window toward Pikes Peak. At sunset, Mom and I stood at the window.  Not Dad, Brothers or Sister, just us. As the sun set, the angles of the mountain were etched against a darkening sky. As the sun disappeared, the light exploded in seconds of glory.

We held hands. Certainly not cool for a thirteen-year-old boy. A special moment for me.  On a scale, one-hundred.


Writing Prompt
Write a hundred words story which starts with :
First word : One
Last word : hundred
So you only have 98 words to frame a story.

     

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