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2017 JAPANESE POETRY
: haiku (Summer clouds) by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
Summer clouds
move slower than molasses—
free pastime






 

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Less than 17 syllables?
What is the season? (kigo)
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MariVal Bayles aka Gypsy
Member of Haiku Society of America
Fanstory Haiku Instructor
June class: Haiku 101


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