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Patience has its limits. (Especially for the elderly.)
Timothy and Marylyne in Love's Embra by Ogden
Repetition Poem writing prompt entry
REPETITION POEM (Must repeat a line three times)
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Timothy and Marylyne in Love's Embrace

I will love you, Marylyne, until the end of time.
I'm sorry dear, you have your thumb in my ear, and I didn't hear.

That's your hearing aid, not my thumb; have you been tippling the rum?

What were you whispering in my ear, dear, that I didn't hear?

"I will love you, Marylyne, until the end of time!"

I still can't hear you, Timothy; be patient with me.

"I will love you, Marylyne. Until.....The End of Time!"

Whaaat?!!
 (HICCUP!)    
Time's up!!
 


Writing Prompt
Write a poem where the same line is repeated at least three times in the poem.

     

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