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Complex Alliterisen
Luna's Form Poetry
: Too Much Nonsense by Luna
To Mickey, with love.


Mother moon hears flying fairies
cleverly caroling, each all aglow;

wind wakes sleeping snowbunnies.
Look left ~ languishing pretty pixies
who want to play pogo!
Five fair maidens beside their ‘troths ~
Today they’ll have a white wedding.

 

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Author Notes
To Karen: (The bride wore black...)

For this complex alliterisen I had to have two alliterations per line in only seven lines. There are many sequences to the complex alliterisen, but the one I chose was as below:

First line: 8 syllables
Second Line: 10 syllables
Third Line: 7 syllables
Fourth Line: 9 syllables
Fifth Line: 6 syllables
6th line: 8 syllables
7th line: 8 syllables

     

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